the title really fits the story. good job.
Thanks very much, glad it came across :-)
Great turn at the end of the first paragraph. At first I thought this going to be a little on the morose and brooding side. And bold choice with the sexuality thing as well.
Amazing how this person found freedom from death. I agree that the title fits perfectly! Very nice job.
Amazing how this person found freedom from death.
I agree that the title fits perfectly! Very nice job.
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