The last line says it all. But mostly I hate the way I say I hate you so much, but dont end up meaning it at all. Great story. I love the way you wrote it.

i love it, and i agree… the last line is awesome. i have been in this situation so many times!

Reminds me of Miley Cyrus for some reason….

I hate that music video! Very cool poem, though.

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Reminds me of Miley Cyrus for some reason….

I hate that music video! Very cool poem, though.

Mesa likes!

I really like this story. Written very well – it certainly packs a punch. Great job!