Marked mature for language
There’s something to be said for “intensity”, which this has… If you write a sequel, make it a bit more descriptive so we’ve got the whole context painted clearly. Intensity in an opening is what I truly like, and this has it.
No sequels planned, just a little venting I needed to do. Sorry. Everyone needs to do it at some point.
Mask By The Moon
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Mask By The Moon