Nice, Dorothy becomes a multi dimensional character now. I like the progression from her lost confused state to an explanation.

Thanks :)

Please feel free to take it and run with it, haha. Your last addition added a perfect twist!

well, I see Michael is really just concerned! I see now that Dotty is really only putting herself in trouble. Again, great descriptions, and I hope somebody sequels!

too young that is like being too hot too rich or too awesome…unless its an illegal sort of too young then it is TOO YOUNG

I finally was able to think up a sequel even though I feel brain-dead. I think it makes sense…

Aw, Michael. He seems to really care about her. How sweet.