i am having a hard time getting into this series? and i just figured out why, when i was in the first grade in mrs mcraw’s class i sat behind a girl named mariana her mom was a librarian at the public library and she smelled like cabbage, the girl not the library. If that makes sense to you could you explain it to me.lol good story though.

Creepy – but very well written. Your use of description sets the tone wonderfully… Very good job!!