Great set up for a longer, more indepth story, sequel? I’m gonna have to add you as a contact to keep up on your stories!

Ginny… I knew one Ginny once – perhaps not that attractive, but very close. And she was second-guessing herself alright. Memories. Good character.

its the third guess thats dangerous

Very cool descriptions, not too over-powering, but they still paint a picture.

And perfect grammar and paragraph spacing, too!