it’s funny cuz i just read “the lonely dead” and they had a whole CROATOAN subplot thingy-serendipitous fiction happens quite a bity around me sometimes…nice beginning suitably creepy

it’s funny cuz i just read “the lonely dead” and they had a whole CROATOAN subplot thingy-serendipitous fiction happens quite a bity around me sometimes…nice beginning suitably creepy

Nice gentle hook. Like bring in a fish. good job