Ooh..

Creepy. Did someone try to kill her, or was it some mysterious operation gone wrong?

Very nice descriptions. Amazing how much you notice if you can’t speak anymore… I want a chocolate chip cookie now.

wow, this is rather creepy, and mean the rope scar, like an attempted hanging…and why is it marked on the calendar if it’s been a long time? hmmm

Neat picture, a person retreating to a passive stance towards life because of the loss of their voice. Made me think of that Twilight Zone where the guy makes a bet about not talking for a year.

To reply to your earlier comment it’s really a good submission.The ending piece is chillingly creepy, the whole idea of the protagonist getting sidelined from life for the lack of a voice is good indeed

Dang, this is good… I still have a knot in my stomach…