very well written, congrats on featured story, this one definitely earned it

i agree. Very well written. But i thought nine + 4 = 19?

hello i liked this story. It was sweet

i love this story so dramatic ^^ itinspired me to write

yoda must really be on crack

The story was very well written. My only issue was the over use of “beast” and “sea serpent.” Other than that the story was very quite good.

I rather liked it. It somewhat reminds me of Moby Dick.