Comments on The End by The Ghost in the Machine

OrangeOreos

Oh wow…

Talk about disaster.

These descriptions make his horror come to life very well. Amazing!
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:17:53.
Mistress Elsha Hawk

awesome! I like the sort of Metroid feel of the robots! Again with the Russians…I really always have said it will be them…
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:17:53.
madwriter108

Whoa, nice description. Keep it up-this is good!
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:17:53.
Mistress Elsha Hawk

awesome! I like the sort of Metroid feel of the robots! Again with the Russians…I really always have said it will be them…
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:17:54.
THX 0477

Great job with the scope in this one, starts small, balloons out, then snaps back in to the smaller scene. Very effective.
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:17:54.
THX 0477

Great job with the scope in this one, starts small, balloons out, then snaps back in to the smaller scene. Very effective.
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:17:54.
RainDance

That did not help my dislike for/creepy feelings about robots. Well written, you scared me.
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:17:54.