scary! You’re the guy we all fear, secretly don’t want to mess with, don’t want to be involved with :) The guy movies are made around..usually a villain, the one that gets away..

Hahahah Very well done. Good style, inventive, good job.

Wow! This reminds me of Wanted, or at least from what my brother’s told me of the plot.

Very cool. This man is a very interesting character already!

Brilliant character, great job!

Well, I don’t think it topped your ficlet, but I gave a shot at a sequel!

Thanks for the kind words everyone. OrangeOreo, I’ll be sure to check out your sequel.