I’ve been there. You do a great job of capturing the emotions; on the one hand, wanting to keep holding on, but on the other, not wanting to suffocate the person. Wonderfully written.

very beautiful, now if only I could hear it!

Wow.. Wonderful… I love poems and songs that I can relate to, and this reminds me of my friend’s thoughts, and feelings…

Touching. Very nice.

I really like this one…..i want to sing it! will you teach me? we could have a recording session at my house soon….i think:)