Think over what? What is she talking about?

Don’t listen to your friend. Only write if that’s your desire. Lots of mistakes in this ficlet.

I wrote this really late after having a really bad day. I’m going to go back and edit it sometime in the very near future.

I wrote this really late after having a really bad day. I’m going to go back and edit it sometime in the very near future.

I don’t think this is that bad, actually, it’s just a bit rough around the edges going from the inner narrator to the omni- narrator. Keep working on it. It shows promise, I think.