ehhh its okay, but it could’ve worked better… Oh well it wont end up in a long series sadly.. which is what I kind of wanted
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(unless Holly is smarter than Mark thinks)

I JUST GOT AN IDEA !! (Above..)

Haha I love the continuation!
Hes such a playerr!
My favorite line is this one: “He took out a sharpie and started writing Jedda’s name underneath the last sixteen girls he had gone out with.”
Definitely 5stars

If you want to you could sequel it… but I did have a sorta good idea for holly (to start it off maybe) i dont know if you want to extend it though.