Now we’ve got some real texture here! And the texture I’m getting is that this girl is twisted! I love it!
I’d like to see where this thing goes…

Haha I love this but the character names got messed up. Elise is the friend borrowing the bracelet and I didnt really name the person who found the bracelet :[

Besides this the writing is brilliant!

The person who found the bracelet is named Audrey.

Ah, okay! Name changes are done!

The girl is evil…I love it! The last line was good. Congrats on a job well done.

great sequel!!!

(one thing: you used the word “innocent” in some form 4 times.
here are some synonyms: “uncorrupted” and “virginal.”
thanks to dictionary.com)

Hey, thanks Invisy! And welcomes back! I did repeat two of those on purpose though. For dramatic effect and all.

wow nicee
love it