Lovely story and a nice job with the quiet, reflective point of view. Couldn’t help but make an attempt at continuing the magic a little. You have sequel.

lol, great ending, a twist worth wading through the beautiful laments of the stony angel. :)

Imagine seeing a statue smile at you… That would definitely creep me out more than a little.

If a statue smiled at me I would
A) Karate kick its stone head off
(depending on the smile)

B) Smile back.

Hi! I feel very happy because my picture inspired such a great tale! I really liked it a lot! Maybe I’ll write a prequel based on what happened when I took the picture, but I have to think about it…
Keep writing such awsome tales! Thanks!

David

5 stars. I like the analogies.

wow! this story is truly awesome so far, so deep and poetic! I am guessing it is written from a dead person’s point of view? One question though: if the narrarator was dead, how come he would still be on earth, and not in heaven? Or is he really dead at all? This is a very intruing story; please read and comment on my story, called “Residing Dreams”. 17 chapters so far!!!!!!!