I love the detail!!
You described the drive of people in the olympics so brilliantly amazing.
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Cool, but there is no such thing as the 200 meter hurdles, just the 110 meter hurdles.*

Ya, I thought aboutthat…. Oh well, there isnt any hurdler named Brian Oswald either

nice vivid descriptions, makes my ankle hurt.
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Ouch! I’ve had my ankle broken, and I can tell you its no easy feat to run, much less walk with it. XD But I loved the fact that his determination made him keep going. I agree with Living in Wonder Land; the drive of the athlete was well described. Great job! : )