Not a fan of thee whole elf thing. 2.333 stars.

ya, same here. I liked the original stories better.

I’m sorry I dissapointed you guys. I tried to do justice to the story, but I guess it didn’t work out, I’m really obsessed with fantasy.

Interesting take on the story. I’m glad to see it’s growing. I’m not big into fantasy, but overall I liked it!

Don’t like it? Write your own version. A story CAN take diverging paths.

Well, I sequeled, but I’m not sure if it’s good. I don’t write much fantasy, but I kind of made it so it wasn’t too much in the fantasy genre… well just read it and tell me what you think please!

Hmm, I don’t like the elf thing sorry. it took away from the original-ness.
The rest was good but the elf thing was unncecessary.

Eh I’m on the fence about the elf thing. I like that you brought the fantasy into it. I’m curios to see where this goes.

Eh, i like elves, but im not sure about this. I wonder where this will go…