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“his breath kissed her neck ever so lightly. her heart raced, the beating matched the music.”

ooo and “she looked up at blake, and his eyes were waiting for hers.”

AMAZING GIRL !

Very intense moment. It could use some spacing to keep clear who is talking. Doing a double ‘enter’ to make a new paragraph actually doesn’t take any more characters than a double space after a period, and makes for a much easier to read text.
Character-wise, she seems rather passive, though that can simply be realism.