I liked the descriptions from the angel’s point of view, and especially the line about the building not being a church. Very cool!
Ooh…I have a good idea where this place is. I’m glad my ficlet inspired you. : )
Well, you’ve got a sequel! XD Hopefully it was what you were aiming for – this is what it reminded me of. : )
it’s always difficult to describe everyday items from an alien perspective.. yet I was able to follow the angel on her journey through town. :)
wow. this is great. 5 stars. very intriguing. off to read the sequel.
wow… i can’t wait to see what happens next!
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