nice twist! I guessed it was the mother.. but I didn’t expect the name problem!

Ooh, entirely different than what I was imagining, in theme, setting, and possibilities. Love the mysterious ending on it, and don’t get me wrong. As usual, I love that it’s not what I was envisioning.

Sweetness… this is so touching!

hmmm. makes we wonder. a very surprise twist open for possibilities.

that’s me not we

Awesome…

This has so many possibilities! I love it!

all i can say, is amazingly captivating!!! wow, u could be published!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Finally got around to a sequel. It took me a bit to incorporate the themes that had been bouncing around in my head with where you took the story.