Whoa, this sounds really cool. I’ll be interested in a sequel. I liked how you asked the questions but no one could answer them. Hopefully they’ll be answered eventually :] Great job!

Oh and I also liked how you described her clothing. So, so detailed you could practically see her just standing there.

wonderful they way you described the scene. it really conveyed just how lost the character is. 5 stars

Awesome! Thank goodness someone sequeled, or all those little questions would have gathered and made me head explode!

Here we go. To be good you have to work with the great. ;-)