the last paragraph was kind of thrown in, I get that it’s her thoughts, but it messes with the flow..reading on!

Thanks for the advice. I added a sentence but I really don’t know what to do with it. I think I’ll just get rid of the whole thing.

i looooove it.
adore.
admire.
:D

oh no.. Jason…. That name means he is mysterious. Blonde hair? Please tell he he has blue eyes!
LoA

haha she left him hanging. Aw poor fella! lol I like this guy for some reason.

Yes he is rather likeably even tho we just met him and he seems a lil creepy.