Comments on The Sniper - 400 Ficlets Challenge by Wyatt Aapr

OrangeOreos

Wow. That was great, too! It definitely fit the picture, and the character was great!
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:24:55.
Freedom

I agree. Yeah, that was a totally different angle then the other entree. Great job on this. Thanks for entering :]
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:24:55.
Mistress Elsha Hawk

eww, his eye! great job! I love the action, run and pause, the meticulous guards who don’t look out into the grass! it is totally different from the other entry!
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:24:55.
g2 (la pianista irlandesa)

It’s as different as you can get! Full of the tension, the suspense! Well Done!
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:24:56.
RainDance

I like how the eye was incorporated, it was defninitely unique.
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:24:56.
N555champ /\and/\ X-Ninja

True Dat homie, great incorporation of the eye, totally different.
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:24:56.
THX 0477

Very gripping, intense use of the photo. Fun to read without the photo right there from the challenge but to still have it in the back of my head. Too cool.
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:24:56.