oo, caught! set up and caught! interesting story :)

lol funny. Very good job.

great story.

Great job on this. I love this line. Those penetrating, burning eyes. Thanks for entering.

ehhh not feeling as much. My low IQ helped in the fact didnt understand it.

Intriguing bit of cat and mouse and memory here. Great, creative leap from the photo.

amout=amount, perhaps.

I like how this is hinting at a past relationship that the reader is left to fill in for him or herself. Very nice!