I posted this as a sequel because the previous ficlet and challenge inspired this, although the storyline is completely different. : )

I loved this to, but to be fair, i’m only judging the first one. Sorry.*

I wasn’t intending to be judged. XD I just thought it’d be nice to have it as a sequel – they’re both really similar, that’s all.

oh! I though this was momma bomb-a! I like this one better, darker, more suspenseful… I expect something big to happen!

startled his breeches off. I loved that!

Just now reading this from a month ago. [Ohwell] Awesome job on this. The last line was kind of spooky. But I agree with Elsha … very suspenseful. Would make an amazing series :]