haha.
its great, and i like how it hints at karma.

I think after writing awhile you find (all of us find) – our voice. A way of saying what’s on our minds that’s real, true, and interesting. You’ve found it! You should absolutely keep writing no matter what anyone else tells you. I really liked this ficlet, and I really like most of what you write. Not to say that you (or me or anyone else) doesn’t occasionally write crap…. : ) Great work!

You are the definitely the voice of the average crazy/normal person. You going to leave this one up to someone else to continue as well?

Yup, it’s up for the taking. I like seeing how things turn out. So sequel away.

I agree with a lot of what was said. This seems so effortless, but real. It strikes a chord with people because of the “realness” of it. Wonderful!

Well written.

i like it, and thats it, because you seem to know what style of writting is you.

i havnt found that yet and its quite annoying.

Wow! Hey, wait a minute…did you spy on me to write this story? Huh Huh HUH ? No, wait, then the title would have been “ADD With a Side of Paranoia.”
Uhm…well, never mind. (back to a real comment now…)
Generally speaking, I LOVE it! Keep going!

I love how this story is funny. Great work!

WOW . interesting. really good. i dont have ADD but i have a cousin with it and she struggles. good work!!