Wow. That’s intense.

Very intense and exciting scenario. Made me think of Spiderman comics, where the jumper always reaches out when Spidey swings in at the last second. Bonus points for making me think of comic books!

I feel like I just fell. This reads like a movie scene. The internal workings of your character blend nicely with the action of the fall.

Good job. Now that is something Shakspeare might have written instead of “To be or not to be, that is the question”
;-)