Intriguing and somewhat chilling- I got goosebumps. I’m really interested in what you’re going to make of this.

I really like this, Day. It is intriguing. I’m sooo glad I decided to click on your icon, cuz I was not going to do so.

I’ve got a lot to catch up on.. This is really good. You put pauses at all the right moments that would intensify the scene. This speaks to that little voice inside us that slowly dies as the repetitiveness and tedium of the adult world sink their paper fangs into us

When i read this i thought that you were like talkin to me! it really did make me think! good job cant wait to see more:)