I absolutely love it.

im 13 too and i luv to write- im goin on 14 soon but- still writing is something i love to do and i had many things published and all tht jazz- ur really good- tht was an awesome storie- cheack out some of my stuff and let me no what u think-

This is amazing… and don’t be worried.. I’m ten and I’ve got some stories that some people have rated five-stars on.

Thank you all so much :D I’ll make sure to check out all the stories you’ve written ^.

I like this one too! I’m also 13 actually I’m turning 13 but there’s no reason to get all technical.Great work!

I am seventeen and I must agree. It is an amazing composition. thumbs up Great work girly.

I found you! It’s a very good story, but it seems a little clumped together and rushed. I get why it’s rushed, I really don’t think this place should put limits on stories. Separate it a little more, like perhaps where the vampire starts to talk about pain, that could be a new paragraph. Overall it’s really good.