I sense great foreboding… nicely done!
see what happens when you lie to your family? they DIE ! lol jk. Great action scene, too bad you had to kill your secondary characters so fast… but it leaves room for the revenge to write the story. :)
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Um, so you’ve been reading old ‘Punisher’ comics? Nicely written, even if the scenario isn’t entirely new.
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