nice work! so far its spot on if you get my drift… ;)

Oh don’t worry Pat. It’ll get even better. No doubt about that.

as long as it’s HER life it will…hah brooke, which one am I?

hmmm, it seems to be a little bit over-dramatic. but other than that, its great.

pre game band show? i wish! and you shouldve made her in color guard. (i’m in color guard i play flute too.) and one of the seniors last year was a bit**. like perfect in every way but she was so mean! otherwise it’s really good. keep it up

i believeeee that she is way too obsessed with this guy-no way is it healthy