Ah! That’s not something you’d expect in a sedan back seat in the lot of an abandoned school!
Nicely done!

Ah, nothing like a boy’s adventure tale. Lots of fun and ambiance.

A creepy ghost story! Needs a campfire to be told around… LOL
How did they (the car and body) get there?
Great beginning!

ok.. I’m hooked.. hehe
On to the next one :)

O.k. I tried to tread back to front, and gave that up. So this is the beginning. I think the title gives a little something away. The description of the afternoon is so idyllic that the last thing one expects is something gruesome. Perhaps if the title were”The Boys Make a Discovery” , you would get a bit of a shock. The finding of the skeleton would be a proper shock to the readers, with out the “spoiler” title…just a suggestion…