Nice start, begging for a sequel.

playing oppossum are we? Fainting at the sight of danger doesn’t save a human though. Unless the guys flee from the crowd around her… they could just as easily pretend to help her and drag her off somewhere.

wow. she could get crushed, unless she is the only one fleeing. 5 stars. I like the pace and feel to this piece.

Yikes. Poor girl. And this does beg for a sequel, if I don’t say so myself…

You have sequel! I added to the confusion! Hurrah!

Awesome imagery, very sparse and ominous.

Agree with above. Interesting. Reading on…