Amazing. It’s a real shame how people tend to treat gay people nowadays. Personally, anyone can love whoever the hell they want.
Yeah, I’m pro gay.

Actually, I think you could have left out the bit at the end, “gay member” and just left it member. I Iike that I had to re-read a bit to make sure I understood what was happening. Nice start.

great beginning. i loved the detail about the purple coat.