Is this based off the girl in your dream or something? That’s what it sounds like. And it’s quite poetic.

Thanks for spoiling it Brooke, now it MAKES SENSE !

Aww, I didn’t know it was a secret. :( I’m sorry. But this version does sound better.

Not a secret, but it sounds better without the reader knowing what I’m talking about. more mysreious…but if she reads it thats awesome

*mysterious

Haha, your comments are hilarious! But really, awesome job on this. We all understand its about a girl you like because you couldn’t be talking about anyone else. Unless its your mom or something. XD Great job!