the idea behind this is good, but there seems to be some meandering from one idea to the next in your story, making it difficult to follow exactly what’s going on. There are two many “they’s” to puzzle out. Otherwise, I think this could be a great series!

saweet idea, the tone kinda reminds me of the Uglies, Pretties, Specials books by Scott Westerfeld. I echo Elsha in the confusion bit, but other than that it’s really got potential. Mind if I sequel? I can’t help myself…