Awesome and careful depiction of the scene and the mindset. I love when horror genre stuff gets this kind of realistic treatment. And to be honest, I don’t think I’ve seen it put this way before, the idea of actively hunting the undead instead of cowering or running. And I watch a lot of zombie movies.

this one’s got Army of Darkness flare! and I think it’s creative to use the wife and kids line in both sides of the story!

Suspenseful,seeing his motivation and the descriptions od as its happening ,great way to tell this story.

The realism in this series, I guess, is quite unique. I agree with THX . Very exciting scene as well.

I agree with Elsha that is was creative to use the wife and kids line again! Nice little connection, and POV change was a great idea!

I love the seeming uncertainty in this character. I can almost see him closing his eyes as he pulls the trigger and then nothing happens.
I can feel the sweat on his brow – the whole bit.
The way you described this left some to the reader’s imagination, all the while allowing us to get complete absorbed into the scene.

Great Job keeping with the style & feel of the Prequel too.

Oooh, a POV shift. You sly devil.

omg this series is so cool!! u should write a prequal with backround information.

I just wanted to mention how cool it is that you made a parallel between two extremely different characters; one being against the other and all. Amazing :)

Okay, okay, so it’s lame to sequel the super-popular ficlets, but I couldn’t resist the slight dig at the other sequel, me and my zombie movie mania.

Awesome.