A pretty cool idea. Almost Matrix-esque, but without the robot element. I would say it needs to be developed further, but then again I’m well aware of how challenging it is to squish a detailed/constructed story into 1024 characters.

Nice ending. great premise.. you’re very good at sci-fi I enjoy reading your ficlets. eliments of Vanilla Sky. only better,more coherent.

The stars didn’t show up,, but I gave you 5.