Good one dude!!
We sorta had the same idea, hehehe..
I also wrote one from the Wife’s POV .

But your ending is a bit of a surprise.
Good Sequel.

This is such a terrific continuation of the story, Andrew. Great job!

great last line! she’s a brave woman! this could almost follow ALRO ’s too. :P

So good.

And, hey: Welcome to Ficlets, Bates!

Thanks, Will! Laziness and procrastination could only hold me off for so long. Good to see you on here, too.

This is heartbreaking… I can’t stop reading.

wow,that crazy,and it held my attention till the end,good work

Hah! That is one awesome first ficlet, dude. Very nice. I especially liked the last line!