hmm, so the picture was on the floor? weird. I think it’s magical! :P

oooh.. mysterious!
i love the descriptions you put in here, like, “fraying rug” and such, you get what i mean ;-).
my favorite word in this is “quire”, because i don’t know what it means :)
good job, overall ! =]

Very mysterious and creepy. Amazing job at your descriptions and the scene we can all imagine in our heads.
FIVE STARS :]

And I agree with One Time, One Chance. I don’t know what quire is either but I like the sound of it. Off to go look it up XD haha

ooo mysterious… i like it, it’s a little queer.

ooo mysterious… i like it, it’s a little queer.