Awesome start Elsha! This will be a very great series!LoA
Holy wow. That was great. I loved the beautiful imagery of the flames, and the outrage that the marshal should defile it in such a way. Wonderful!
LOL @ OrangeOreos’ comment. “Holy wow,” indeed. And I’m always a sucker for good closing lines.
mc 900 foot Jesus did a song called “while the city sleeps” …or something like that about ab arsonist , check that out, this is an incredibly evocative piece…love it
ya.. great start here… i think you painted a wonderful picture here …
I’ll give you another holy wow. I love the depth and beauty of the descriptions. I love me some fire.
I agree with everything said here :)
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