Inconsistent verb tense! Argh! Caps for emphasis! Rowr! Telling rather than showing in the last paragraph. Don’t take this personally, but this ficlet is begging for stylistic comments.
Inconsistent verb tense! Argh!
Caps for emphasis! Rowr!
Telling rather than showing in the last paragraph.
Don’t take this personally, but this ficlet is begging for stylistic comments.
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