I’m not sure how I feel about this one… but Yoda’s original was just begging for a sequel.
Great work, this is an awesome sequel, full of emotions.
I’m glad you wrote a sequel to this – wasn’t sure where to go with it, but love the direction you took. Great work, Kevin!
Very nice. I love the line of “tears … cutting ribbons in his mask.” It could be interesting to build two sequel paths from here, one where the demons win, and one where they don’t.
Very nice. I love the line of “tears … cutting ribbons in his mask.”
It could be interesting to build two sequel paths from here, one where the demons win, and one where they don’t.
Absolutely brilliant. The sheer genius of this is amazing.
I like the confrontation of man and emotion. The inner battle between good and evil. Wonderful work.
Kevin Lawver
Saint Chuck
YodaOnCrack
T.F. Torrey
Laine the Grey
Storykeeper of Fae