Ooh, this one gave me chills. I suspected he/she was the culprit, but I wasn’t sure till the end. Brilliant!
wow… I didn’t read the prequel, but this is intense. Beautiful.
‘call 911 dear, and I’ll get some towels, that poor bloody man.’ LOLOLOL! Wonderful! Gotta love the insides of arsonist’s minds.
haha! That mom comment is halirious. nice sequel really shows his character off some more!LoA
right, he’s really just in it for the flames, i luv a clear cut,specific obsession. He doesn’t want to hurt anyone,he(or she)just wants to watch the pretty fire.
Next time I’d have to be more careful. hehe “Next time, i’ll just have to burn somebody” hehehe… creepy. nice continuation here.
Next time I’d have to be more careful.
hehe “Next time, i’ll just have to burn somebody” hehehe… creepy.
nice continuation here.
What an ending! Great final line and I love the arsonist’s willingness to defend the brilliance of fire, if need be.
That desire is just so strong ‘it left me wanting more…’. Your piece effectively portrayed the yearning in the character for the dance of flames :)
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