Reminds me of the type of banter from the book Of Mice and Men.
Very good descriptions and word choice!
5 stars

It is like OMaM… beautifully put together.
I haven’t read the rest of the series, but you don’t alienate the new reader. Bravo!

LOL ! I love the shootout! Those guys will have no idea what really is going on! (never read OMaM, so have no idea about that, but the dialogue is perfect!)

I think you should put a little less cursing in your story. Put a little more imagination in. All in all, alright. By the way, I’m looking forward to your comments and advice on my stories. You have alot of stories Good Luck writing there might be a new sheriff in town (hahaha just kidding)