Awww, how sad. :(. But this is really good all the while.

This is heartbreaking, and the matter-of-fact voice renders it all the more tragic. Great first contribution – welcome to Ficlets! :)

Awesome tale of a tragic moment! i liek how you add more details to lead us up to the truth, and Welcome to Ficlets!

I echo Ana & Mistress Elsha… and I also welcome to Ficlets!

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…not working.