Brilliant, sci-fi but not completely unbelievable.

Good job. Like the word choice, such as infinitesimally. It felt like I was in one of those RTS games you like so much…

Is Corvatti a play on Corvette, or just a coincidence?

Definately interested in the backstory or anything further on the attack.

Verry good, i like that you make it feel like your actually there, good work.

Very creative. I’m impressed.

reminds me of enders game…love it, though. i loevd ender’s game too of course…

I completely forgot about Enders Game.. Awesome book I must agree with you there. Ive read a lot of science fiction, so it all kinda came together in my mind… theres a lot of influence in this haha.

ya.. i really enjoy Scifi, and have written a few scifi stories here..
I really enjoyed this …
It’s got me hooked.. going to read the sequels.