i’m sorry that everyone makes you feel this way =(( but I tried and there’s nothing else I can do for you unless you tell me what you want

This is very poetic. You keep a steady beat, and I really kinda feel bad for the protagonist in this… Nice job. (I kinda feel like I’m interfering with a relationship here…)

no, ur not, asrah and i are friends

just reading this feels like you’re intruding into a secret relationship! LOL , and its well written, very poetic, and bittersweet. Awesome jester metaphor! yeah, in life, you can’t always get what you want…