This is a really cute series you’ve started here. Just a few things. Said is used quite a bit in the first paragraph. You might want to change some of them to things like asked, replied, answer. Its just kinda over kill the way it is now. One other thing, the second paragraph is kinda choppy. It could use some more punctuation especially when your talking about the siblings. Besides that you did a great job.

penguincaptain18 is correct. The story is fine, but the structure needs some work. Before you submit it to being ‘published’ reread it with an outsiders eyes.